This is my story about a lion

WALT: add descriptive words to my writing.

Remember to:

• use your senses - what can you hear, see, smell, touch and taste
• add in similes and metaphors
• using feelings

He won't even see me coming, flop flop flop clip. I am on some stilts and about to pounce on the  yummy giraffe. On three. 1. 2. 3. Suddenly he farted and I fainted. Poop! “That smells.”

“Ba ha ba ha haha. You're never gonna get me now. Hehehe bye have a great time,” said the giraffe as he raced away like a taxi.

“I'll get you next time you lucksman.I KNEW I SHOULD'VE GOT THE GASMASK! AHHHHHH!eh I smell like I got sprayed by a skunk.”

3 weeks later I came up with a new plan. It was to become friends with the giraffe and even give him some of these nuts I scavenge from some scared squirrels and then eat him. So I cooled off in a lake by the giraffes turf and got the disgusting smell off me too. So I brought the yummy almond nuts and confronted him.

He said “please don't kill me! Please!”

I said. “I don't want to kill you... I want to become friends with you. i just came to give you some yummy almond nuts.”

“Ohh thank you so much. I really like nuts.”

This is when I attacked him. So I went in for the kill but he had quick reflexes and jumped out of the way and rammed me like rhino. When he hit me I felt like I got hit by 2 blunt horns. I went in for the bite and I hit him because he was really breathing heavily. I drew blood so I keep on getting big bites like a crocodile. Then finally he died so I got some of his delicious looking raw meat. I ripped into it and it tasted great. As I was munching down I saw 50 more giraffe…. YUM...  

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